by EdwardYounggun
Reading your story sent excitement through my thoughts. Your hunger for dirty, wild, male on male sex matches my own. I noticed some spelling errors, which is easy to do when the writer is sexually aroused. I sensed this was either a real experience, or at the least one which you have wanted (and jacked off to) for quite some time.
Writing is not easy I know. Maybe try a shorter story so you can check your work carefully before submitting to be published. When I sense honesty if a queer story, it turns me on so much. I love cock and cum in real life.