by AlanaAllyn
Get an editor. Then get a decent plot. A cheating slut wife and a spineless husband.
O my! Shocking! What a pile of garbage.
So she let another man do what she didn't want her husband to do. That's love for ya, I guess.
Stupid D.Wannabee? His wonderful comments enhance our lives.
I gave up after several paragraps because it wasn't written clearly enough to be understood.
To paraphrase another commenter who has a serious case of "head in ass" syndrome:
"Very good story, the kind of threesome story that I really enjoy. In our world, heroin use is wonderful, the sophisticated and enlightened enjoy it, and it's proof that a threesome CAN happen without any of the three parties being humiliated or degraded, just like this one. Sharing a needle is a deeply bonding experience, and we assume all are healthy since no one would ever endanger another life, mostly because of the vast respect and caring between drug addicts. It was a meeting that all three could enjoy without feeling like they had to hurt someone; how could parents, close friends, or children deny people such a richly rewarding experience? Very erotic, very well-written."
(If you recognize just how stupid that all sounds and can relate one sick behavior to another, you'll then see just how UN-erotic it is.
Very good story, the kind of threesome story that I really enjoy. In our world, a threesome CAN happen without any of the three parties being humiliated or degraded, just like this one. It was a meeting that all three could enjoy without feeling like they had to hurt someone. Very erotic, very well-written.
Great story, very well written, and very, very sexy. Thanks