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cruiser_2015 almost 5 years ago

A good but odd story

Good story, but why divert from sexy Vickie who sounds well worth having? Annie’s obviously just a prostitute and the story would read just as well without the strangely named church. Is there some significance in the church theme I’ve missed? Otherwise nice!

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