All Comments on 'Evergreen Ch. 01'

I think having the hypnotist is taking advantage of the mans wife having her under and haveing her undress in front of him so he can have her for his own sexual fun is sick

Pat

not good.

Don`t finish this crap of a story.

this involintary sex, therefore --RAPE--

SICK mofo

run across a story with a hypnotist before. Lighten up you few commenters - it's only a story.

Another of parts guy's pathetic attempts at writing erotic stories.

This is miss labeled, should be in Mind Control. No score.