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by Cromagnonman

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Diecast1Diecast111 months ago

Great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegler11 months ago

Beautiful and deep great writing. 5 stars. Cheers 🥂

SW_MO_HermitSW_MO_Hermit11 months ago

Not your usual stuff but I liked it. It’s good to dream about a perfect world occasionally even if it’s just a reworked fairy tale. Well done

TechumsahTechumsah11 months ago

Loved it. Took me a second to get it well written sir.

stewartbstewartb11 months ago

This rabbit hole had to be 90% proof and very smooth so nothing would catch during Lawrence's worldly journey twix and between. Cute yarn.

KRD19254KRD1925411 months ago

Where can I find my rabbit hole of utopia, I've yearn for it?...

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

We need to find our happiness wherever we can!

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texlootexloo11 months ago

Well that was something different for this site. It is a lovely fairytale.

linnearlinnear11 months ago

A very nice change of pace and enjoyable.

teedeedubteedeedub11 months ago

Wow. Psilocybin?

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...