All Comments on 'Every Dog Has His Day'

Your fantasy world is an intense place. I would suggest mixing it up a bit as the stories are becoming repetitive. The change from 'free person' to 'owned slave' is always so very rapid. It is jarring and threatens the suspension of disbelief. Your stories would benefit if it were more of a process over time and not the result of a maybe 30 minute interaction.

One must boil the frog slowly, lest it jump from the pot.

It is a shame you seem to have given up writing. This little story is a very good rendition of a knowing Mistress deriving from her new pup what she knows is its best. Further stories off bigger adventures for this Mistress and her pup are much anticipated.

Reading your story made me realize how much I need and crave this Thank you.

Very nice intense story, would like to know how it continues. Always fantasized about being a slave.