by strickland83
I wish this story were longer, but I rated it a 5, anyway.
Your story is both hot and surprisingly realistic.
A short story about a nympho who decided to pull a train and all the boys liked swapping STDs. Whoops just did your story in one sentence.
From anyone else it would be what is expected here - from you it's a disposable misfire.<P>
Don't sully the prior great work - please.<P>
Anybody could write this drivel. So it's a mulligan of sorts - hopefully.
I liked your story because I was in one of those trains once in Detroit and you told it just like it is .
This is silly- No stupid is a better word. Nothing sexy about demeaning yourself. Nothing sexy about using a woman in a brainless release of sperm.
I love reading about sluts, she should of meet her further husband that night.
...story by the writer... or maybe not?
In many respects it doesn’t paint a very erotic picture and I suspect that this was the author’s intention....