All Comments on 'Every Guy at the Party'

...story by the writer... or maybe not?

In many respects it doesn’t paint a very erotic picture and I suspect that this was the author’s intention....

I love reading about sluts, she should of meet her further husband that night.

This is silly- No stupid is a better word. Nothing sexy about demeaning yourself. Nothing sexy about using a woman in a brainless release of sperm.

Good story. It's nice to see some cum slut appreciation out there.

I liked your story because I was in one of those trains once in Detroit and you told it just like it is .

From anyone else it would be what is expected here - from you it's a disposable misfire.<P>

Don't sully the prior great work - please.<P>

Anybody could write this drivel. So it's a mulligan of sorts - hopefully.

Not sexy, not erotic, not entertaining, pure rubbish.

A short story about a nympho who decided to pull a train and all the boys liked swapping STDs. Whoops just did your story in one sentence.

I wish this story were longer, but I rated it a 5, anyway.

Your story is both hot and surprisingly realistic.