All Comments on 'Every Man's Fantasy'

I gave it a 3 because I did not like the story stopping when it had just begun. When is the rest of it?

Finish it! Please

The other comments say it all.

My "favorite" was 'indefinitely' instead of 'inevitably'!

... someone to proof-read, correct the punctuation and grammar and generally act as an Editor!!

Go to "Literotica"; "Index"; "Volunteer Editors"!

As this story stands I'd give it 3*.

If it had been better written it could have earned more!!

There has to be a sequel to this what with him hand cuffed to the bed. Maybe fucking Monica and all of her friends.

There is no flow and a bunch of grammatical errors.