All Comments on 'Everyone, But Me'

I really enjoyed the story. I could nearly feel and see what was happening. Hoping for more.

Your first real lover was right, you deserve a good spanking. That beautiful lil thing

-papi

I loved this story. At first I was a little apposed to your unique -for lack of a better word- writing style, but it quickly grew on me. You seem to have easily done what many of us writers strive for; you made it real. I was basically in the train, looking away in shame, while this yoing girl was violated. And as soon as she liked it, I too turned against this victim of circumstance.

I am about to go check out your other works, if you have any, and I'm sad to say that I have the most rediculous expectations. I can't wait for those to be blown out lf the water.

Thank you for this masterpeice.

-TBP