All Comments on 'Everyone is Invited'

Fantastic story. You really knocked it out of the park.

Is high school never over?

Realistic Femme/domme input provided, imagination added for good measure, your well crafted 'CFNM' submission was unanimously voted superb by your many submissive male NZ fans!

Great story with great characters! Would love a sequel!

Pretty sure he would have kicked her to the curb long before allowing himself to be abused like that. And that's what it was - abuse. Kick the bitch to the curb.

And take care of some if these WACC writers in know several other readers who wish they could after this piece

that was so hot. wish I could spend some time being Miss Apples sissy and would definatly like her to take me to a party

This reads like it came from some high school wimp that fantasizes about the people he envied in school. It says more about why the guy was a wimp than it does about anyone with a submission fetish. Regarding the crowd not recognizing the girl.... Bullshit squared.

The Police and the ambulance showed up. Miss Apple was hauled off to jail. The end to the stupidity. You really thought he was going to let the bitch get away? That he was going to expose himself to diseases and humiliation? This was HIS show. He taught the lessons. Now Miss Apple spends her time in prison as Big Bertha's Bitch.

Awful story. Have Lit's standards sunk so low?

I think Kevin walks away and never speaks to her again. Why would he? This was just poorly thought out drivel.

About as bad as it gets

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