All Comments on 'Everyone Knows But Them Ch. 01'

by les_sammy_0211

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Aftermath82Aftermath82over 12 years ago
very interesting!

Can't wait to read what happen next. Continue this please.. I love the idea of this story

nivaninivaniover 12 years ago
Good Start

Keep writing....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good First Story

Keep on writing about these guys...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved it!!!

keep writing I wanna read more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Oh, I love this story. The situation you've created ought to produce lots of drama and I really like the characters.

Can't wait for a continuation :D!

RikonaRikonaover 12 years ago

love it! hot story! cant wait for the next chapter! happy writing! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

write the next chapter now! soo goood

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Waiting

this chapter was so good. it made me want more. could you please hurry with the next chapter? i have a feeling its going to be great

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
next chapter

i cannot wait 4 next chapter..........pls pls pls

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Write fast

This is hot.

DelsetDelsetabout 10 years ago
I <3 a good layup

this story titillates so much. How can even such a hot phonesex session feel like i'm looking through but a keyhole, into the hot sweaty, yet romantic moments to come?

DelsetDelsetalmost 8 years ago

Still love this story.

Most recent reason: "Julian julienne the carrots."

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
THIS STORY IS UN FINISHED

DONT WASTE YOUR TIME READING IT

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