All Comments on 'Everything Happens for a Reason'

I have already found an editing error where I called Melanie, Denise. This must have been a Freudian slip :) A re-edited version is being submitted

Couple things - Melanie had "grapefruit" sized breasts initially then they progress to "big boobs" with Lindi. I really didn't see the "romance" in the story, despite being well written and good sex scenes. It would be more appropriate in the EC genre. You could have better adapted it to this genre with a romantic connection with Lindi, or something similar. 4.1*

What a beautiful little sexy story. It had a few fuck ups, but I’m not the grammar police. I liked it. Five stars and a heart.

This is another fun story, with an interesting plot. It seems like a series of vignettes rather than an in-depth story to me. I enjoyed reading it, so thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work

I will leave the grammar and spelling to others..I thoroughly enjoyed the story and thank you