All Comments on 'Everything Looks Better Ch. 03'

I am a big FFX fan so I like the subject matter of this story and I love the new character you have created. But ultimately this is supposed to be an erotic writing website and this story is 3 chapters in now without so much as a kiss! If the story doesn't move on to being a bit more intimate then I am going to lose interest.

I am falling in love with this story! I just wish I didn't have to wait so long between the chapters.