All Comments on 'Everything Looks Better Ch. 12'

I don't know who told you that writing a male point-of-view was an issue for you....but it never occurred to me that you may not be a male until I read that so I think you do it quite well. Keep writing 'em and I'll keep reading 'em!

I've always loved the way you wrote this story. So many fanfics are not well written or have much that I find appealing as a woman. One of my favorites. I lost it for years, but something sparked me to try to find it again. I know it's been a long time but I hope you haven't given up writing.

Sincerely,

SniperWolf

This story was amazing. Excellent and descriptive writing, consistent characters with great development, and heartwarming plot. I do not have anything negative to say, and I believe you write as unaffectedly and easily from the male point of view as from the female. You're a really talented writer. Cheers!