by nerd4music
I like the fact that all of your storys are connected. Thats really cool.
I love this story. It had a good beginning and AN ENDING!!!!!!!!
There are so many stories started years ago on Literotica that leave you hanging.
Thanks for giving us readers a complete story!!!!!
Finally they got together. Even though Connor was kinda being a jack when he finally made the move for Ang, he was pushed over the edge and it was hot how he said things. No more hiding the truth or it all; he wanted this woman for 8 damn years and was going to get her without bullshit!
So good omg, I didn't want it to end but I'm so happy their together and engaged
First.. I thought Conner was super hot I even wanted him and second the writing was great really hooked me... kudos
Good story. Well written, well paced and well ended. Also thanks for not dragging it with unecessary drama and shit. like some others author like to do. Would like to read about Dex and Roxies
Charlie just kind of weaseled out of things and Connor was too much of an asshole about getting together. I definitely wanked though ;)
Absolutely love this story! This is my favorite out of the series. Funny, sexy & kinky....shoot. He is so deep. I want me a Connor now.
A girl can dream :-)
Conner and Angela are just too cute!! Great story and five stars for every chapter!
Loved the ups and downs and that sometimes love does prevail.
the story was great this story reminds me of me and my love right now everything happend for a reason and a lil happiness is all everyone need but somethime we let things hold us back GREAT STORY LOVE
Her love finally has come along.......Angie could never be happy with Charlie and he knew it, she never looked at him like she did Connor, and he finally did the right thing and walked away! I feel sorry for Charlie, but I am so very happy for Connor. He finally stepped up and became the man he needed to be for Angie! To be the "Pulse of his heart!" Damn that is deep!
This entire story was amazing. It had everything, comedy, drama, romance, suspense. I absolutely loved it. Thank you.
Happiness at last. Sometimes what we are looking for is right under our nose or right before our eyes.
I loved every chapter of this story. Many parts reminded me of myself and my boyfriend. I was into this chapter also until the pierced nipples. Ruined it for me.
That was a great story i just love the Hartley sisters and Ange and Conner are just perfect together great work.
Pulse of My Heart would have been awesome title. I loved the story. Everything was so HOT...keep up the good work.
...with the characters! Thank you for a great read and I can\\\'t wait for more by you!
<b><big> I TOTALLY FELL IN LOVE WIH THIS STORY LINE. I HOPE THAT WITH NINA AND SEAN THAT IT WILL PRODUCE ANOTHER STORY AND GET UPDATES IN THEIRS OF ANGIE/CONNY AND ROXIE/DEX. EXCELLENT WRITING. THANX SO MUCH!!!!!!!!</B></BIG>
I gotta tell ya, it was definitely worth the wait! I loved the series and the last two chapters were HOT! You're one of my faves.
I reaaly liked tthe story up to this last chpt.... then it seemed rushed. I'' admit I'm a bit disappointed in it...would've thought connor would be more romantic and less.... I don't knw... harsh... aggressive?
I really enjoyed this story and the conclusion to the Hartley girls. Hope it will continue now that you introduced Angie's partner Sean. Keep up the great writing. I love your stories.
Great story. I just love the family interactions and the happy endings. Keep up the great work