All Comments on 'Evil Husband & His Pranks Ch. 01'

Actually fell asleep reading this, about half way down the first page, commented after waking up again.

You've really got to get this proofread.

The idea isn’t bad, and anyone who writes in their second language deserves credit, but I’m afraid the result is just impossible to read. Your best bet is an editor who you can work with to improve your writing skills.

the story writing may not be at par of excellence, but the creativity and detailing is very good.... waiting for the next part