All Comments on 'Evolution'

i liked this story but i think it would have been better with him fuckin his sisters more not mainly his mom

In my opinion an incredible piece of writing.

I did not once grow bored or had my attention wander from the story.

thank you, really good read. seriously.

From the viewpoint of a Dom/Master you've covered most of the bases well, however, I think I would add some more of the perspective of the subs/slaves. More of their thoughts and emotions would fill this series out very well. Still a very good read.

Fantastic story.

I hope more is on the way.

Hope to read more about this family real soon . Thanks

A well-written story combining my two favorite genres. Keep up the great work!

The story starts with the son already in control of every one in the family.

It would have been nice to have a few chapters getting to that point of the story!

For the ones who haven't read other stories by RayStar, Patriarch is the first one in this series. I would highly recommend it and this one. Good work.

Please tell me there is more.

This was a great story. I'm new to your writings and I really liked it, I just wish there was more to the story. How did his life change? Did he ever search for a girlfriend? Did he introduce her to the Lifestyle and the rest of the family? What happened when his sister got back from out of town? I hope you do more with this one.

This is an affront to any sane loving individual on this planet. The story is garbage just as the author is. Demeaning to even a lowly animal. I guess the the character AND the author are void of basic decency and compassion. B