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MarkT63MarkT63about 1 month ago

Exceptional series!!! Please continue...

Robbb_FangRobbb_Fangabout 1 month ago

Happy to see the series continue!

LynchjimLynchjimabout 1 month ago

Oh how I’m enjoying your mind mr James Duncan ( first name last name club member lol ). This story is one of the best I’d say it’s in my top 3 and it’s early still in your story I can’t wait to see what else you have for us.

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

Glad you're back but this is no longer feeling like erotica anymore like the first several chapters. Focusing way too much on other tangents.

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

Good to see story continue. Maybe work a little on chapter transitions. This one seemed to end abruptly.

Please write more.

V.

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Started writing stories in June 2021, having never written before. This is the first time I've published anything, as they seem to be going down well, and I'm finding it cathartic, then I will likely carry on, however I cannot give specific timescales for publishing new conten...

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