All Comments on 'Ex-Girlfriend's Smokeshow Daughter'

by Not2Pervy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

kinda jumped the gun a bit. Wish you would have written about their first time before jumping to the threesome didn't even get sex with the daughter at all. written at least.

TomNJaxTomNJaxalmost 2 years ago

That has got to be an AWESOME follow-up story!! Can't wait to read it....Love the series....!

nk0075nk0075about 1 year ago

You are a great writer

dawg997dawg99710 months ago

Top-notch sex fantasy story! Great imagination and the ability to wordsmith it.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU for a fun, wonderful story. I really appreciated the respect shown to Lori. Well played on the dynamic of mother/daughter team on Mike.

You have talent, that's easy to see.

Be Well and Happy,

Paul

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great, right up until the last paragraph.

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 months ago

Que Erotique!

11/10!!!!!

WoodencavWoodencav13 days ago

Just wow, so sexy, I do hope you write a storey about the last paragraph. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Playing at being a writer; blending my experiences, fantasies, people I've known, and people I wish I'd known, and creating something new. If it didn't happen, I try to at least make it possible to believe it could have, somewhere, to someone, past, present, or future. I'll ke...