All Comments on 'Examination Techniques'

good story, although the build up to pay-off relationship seems a bit skewed to me.

all hints to help this story......build up good moved to fast to the stuff.....

You lost me where Lucas listened to his own heartbeat via the stethoscope. No can do! If you believed that and put it to paper, the rest will be unbelievable, so I abandoned this story without scoring.

Love your MILF inspired stories . Between Dr Thompson and Mrs McCutcheon here's hoping you keep expanding both stories. Love them both

,,, you DO need to Proof Read.

For example - ""I won't sleep with a former patient hand my age" ?

'hand'?

Should that be 'half'??

When Lucas finds out about Dr. Thompson's schedule, you write that Friday is two days away. Then he tells the reception that he saw the doctor at Starbucks yesterday, and then the doctor herself says she's been crazy for him since she saw him the same day. Which is it? Tuesday, Thursday, or Friday?

Proofreading necessary.

Good proof readers are difficult to find, especially for this genre. I have a PC-based PDF to text reader I use because I'm dyslexic, but there are also multiple text to voice sites on the web. It will help you catch mistakes such as the vs. they, etc.

https://www.naturalreaders.com/online/

Best of luck!

If you as holes were really into the EROTICA, toy wouldn't be focused on the damned typos. Why do ya'll come on this,site?

Blue Poppy keep writing your plots are incredible. Who cares about Anything else

Story was unbelievable hot, but why did you end it with that sentence...it doesn't make any sense. It should have been that she was twirling her pubic hair and stuck her finger in her oven and brought it to her mouth...head tilted with pouty lips....if the guy didn't get the hint then she would throw her panties at his face and say.......there's more where that CAME from....." Yes, please note the pun.

Also, I saw no grammar errors or misspelling. Yes, the receptionist stayed behind and saw all the action.

Hawt A.F.!

11/10!!!!!

Please a chapter 2!

Hot story. Legally and ethically doctors cannot have business or romantic relationships with a current patient. If the doctor patient relationship ends, 6 months later sexual relationship is legal. Just a bit of information. Keep writing.

Thx I read this later so I'm not sure about those saying to proof read but was good enough for me also seen this comment talking bout the ending, fuck that, your ending was nice and classy and leaves just enough detail to envision the scene. It's nice and subtle unlike whatever that other guy suggested. Also your stories a great a shame there's not more but thankyou for the read

Keep writing!

Stopped at the "benefits". Innumerable types of mistakes!!!

Fucking HOT! Very nicely done 😊