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Another couple of chapters would be fun; she just opened up to anal, tried sapphic love, those can be expanded upon in chapter 2. Threesomes and moresomes can wait for chapters 3 and 4. We haven't heard about longer "girlfriend experiences" yet. Yes, thee is room for this to grow into a series. I mean, do red dots have actual private relationships? That could be fun to explore. Do their private and professional relationships ever merge? I could keep envisioning scenarios for days. Toys haven't been discussed yet either!

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my story, and for being so enthusiastic about hearing more of Carly's adventures! I envisioned this as a self-contained little story of a dystopian society in which everybody's destiny is controlled by The Computer. Carly seems to adapt fairly quickly - and well - to her chosen destiny, though one wonders if The Computer is all that wise in the end or if people just assume it is so they change to fit its needs. I didn't intend to write any more about Carly or her world, as I pretty much said what I wanted to say, but never say never!