All Comments on 'Exchange'

a work of art, it's sad that there are so few good stories about succubus love in this site, so i am very grateful to you for writing this story.

I can only hope for more stories about succubus , and not the ones were the poor guy dies but gets to keep the succubus for himself.

I thank you.

Well played. I was expecting the typical succubus story, but the twist made for an... interesting ending. I found it suitably horrific, and well written, with just enough of an original twist to make up for the fairly predictable play of events.

You write well, and it was certainly a disconcerting take on the typical succubus tale.

The only real horror in this story is being trapped in a sexless, shrill marriage with a woman who can't appreciate being given a free ticket down Easy Street.

This story was absolutely fantastic, and Tara got nothing less than exactly what she deserved.