by sissyboi46979
This sounds like it could be a very interesting story please continue.
I do suggest:
ยน. Proofread, and you might want to try out a grammar software/app.
ยฒ. Get an editor.
If you smooth the spelling, grammar and correct use of terms (intents and purposes, etc) it will boost your quality.
Hot story, and I hope you continue!
Your character is a moron. How is going to get his name out there dressed as woman?
The premise was OK, but you could have at least thrown in some obligatory flirting while they were at the ball, even kissing. But literally no one gets fucked in the ass for the first time without it being painful, at least for a while... Would like to have a second version with a little less rush to get to the sex, even if I do like that sometimes ๐
I loved the story. Would love to hear how Monday goes for the girlfriend back in the office.