All Comments on 'Executive Platinum Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keep Going

This makes me anxious for more chapters in the coming days. The back story allows for this not to end at the terminal gate. Please keep going with this story line.

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERover 14 years ago
Great story

Ah, this chapter was such a teaser. I can't wait to read what happens next. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cum on

You can't let it end at the gate like that. Waiting to see more of this storie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keep this stroy going!

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BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 14 years ago
Wow

Very erotic sexual scene. I need a cigarette.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WILL THE SHIPS MEET AGAIN

in a new port anew. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Started writing as submissions on the old Voyeurweb.com bulletin boards. Found I had a bit of a knack for stories that people like, and just continued. I love to hear back from readers when they like a story, or with story ideas, suggestions, or just discussions on anything.

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