by Keat
Mary Ann and Kevin's coupling in this story reads so authentically one can almost experience the feeling right along with the two of them. A very sensuous hot read! Mr Keat surely knows his way around a sex scene. Well Written! Enjoyable Read!
Congratulations. This story is getting better and better. I'll certainly be looking out for your next chapter.
Nor arousing - just plain sick and demeaning for all. They all suck.
But then again I am the one reading and masturbating to stories in the "Loving Wives" category. I suck.
Here I thought this was a really hot story only to find out that marital whoring isn't supposed to be erotic. Whoops.
Since I guess our friend "Anonymous in the USA" is the ultimate judge of what's erotic or not, I will bow to his superior taste and go hide in the corner in shame while I eagerly await the next installment in this series.
-Don Viajero
Once I started reading I couldn't stop. This is just the type of scenario that I really wish could happen with me and my wife. I'd love to be involved in a swinging network and then THIS story. SOOO EROTIC. I'd LOVE to see my wife giving and receiving pleasure and as wanton as she is, I know she'd enjoy some of the attention. The rest would be okay, too - she can take it.
To repeat, a GREAT story..extreemly well written. It develops very well and got my cock hard and ready, just WISHING my wife would agree.
Regards .. Tim
so good i used my dildo like the first time i got one.
Brilliant.
I'd help my man out if i knew this is what i was in for.
You've developed the characters well. A slow, steady built up for me! It does lend me to the fantasy, Would I agree to this arrangement myself?
Another 5 star averaging of Mrs Anon (I assume). I was surprised that Lisa wasn't Kevin's first, but that's coming up soon, I hope. Have to believe Lisa's husband won't be happy.