All Comments on 'Exhibitions Ch. 01'

great keep up the good work got me hot under my collar

Great story. Thanks.

to discover a really lovely writer on Lit.

So glad I found this. Exquisite. Thank you.

Well written, well paced, well worth the read.

When teasing a man; best to get buck naked ASAP, rather than taking three damned pages of tortuous text, to do so! Normally naked to begin with I make no secret of my desire for anal sex; positioning myself for recreative sex, to prove an approved male lover is welcome to have me, anyway he wants me! -Likewise; I normally expect his oral cooperation?

C'mon, Anna, you're movin' too dang slow! I mean, jeez, where's all the raunchy sex?

Methinks Barbara would rather appreciate Dave's delicate sensibilities with Summer, no?

:chuckle:

Anyway, as another reader stated above, yes, it is good to see real elegance in a Lit story. Proper pacing, clever phrasing, realistic dialogue, evocative imagery and skillful narration all make for a quality read, which you've achieved here in spades. Having gone through chapter two already, I can assure your readers that it's every bit as good as chapter one, and I actually like it even more. Playful Anna comes to the fore, and it's just so well written. This story really is a major cut above most Lit offerings...

...but damn it, Barbara wants some Butt Sex! Quit holding out on us!

:-)

Yes, it took a while to get there, but it was worth the trip. I like the descriptive terms used. Looking forward to January.

Thanks

Jack

I am too tired I guess. I wrote everything in the title!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A good revision. I like how things move more slowly and they take more time. :)

Great story (or, rather, the start of one).

This has a more raw and less gentle (though, crucially, no less loving) feel to it than the other stories I've read - Anna and Brad, that is. The sexuality is more overt, and I love the teasing that runs through the whole episode.

I also liked Anna's little wobble. Nice touch. In fact, "nice touch" sums up my feelings about this story, generally. Well done.

Looking forward to the next instalment now... :D