All Comments on 'Exodus 22:16-17'

Loved it! 5 stars and a fave!!!

Love mom

That's some good Bible!

I really enjoy your writing and read them as I can. But I could only give you 4* for this one, for while we ll written and excellent in flow like your stories. It had one defect... since Baz iss clearly a continuation of another story, you lost some continence with the lack of mention of his family that was briefly mentioned in the other prior to his wife's passing.

Would love to see more like this, maybe story on Exodus 21:6-7. See a cute virgin be sold to an older man for his lusts and to get her pregnant.

Have you considered a follow up to 'Conquering Anne'?

Would like to see more coercion/slavery stories ending in deflowering and impregnation. Very good story.