All Comments on 'Expanding Markets Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing Great Work

I absolutely love this story! I don't usually comment but the creativity and the eroticism complied me to comment. Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Left with a lot of questions...

So I loved it, but why did she go from A cups to D almost E cups? Why did Elaine go from a customer to the boss? All that changed was she was signing her up for the stuff, she started to take off her clothes, and then she was fucking Roger? Okay then.....

Timtom12Timtom12about 5 years ago
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The story mentions that Elaine can warp reality, and you're in the mind control section. Why are you questioning it?

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