All Comments on 'Expecting Quadruplets: An Ordeal'

Wow, okay. In my opinion (and only an opinion so take it or not as you see fit) this should be in non erotic. I was expecting to find a fetish story where the lady was grumpy but still capable of arousal. Yet this is so detailed and she is suffering so badly throughout this story, that I keep wishing for it to end, for her sake. Is it realistic? Probably yes. So is a first hand account of a gall bladder malfunction. Neither is very pleasant to read about. The only saving grace for me was the descriptions of the size of her growing belly...but even that, while exciting, made me wince in sympathy for the narrator. Thanks for trying, I guess I'm just too hooked on the fantasy...all the reality gets is my sympathy and cringes.