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by petitelove

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Honey123Honey123over 19 years ago
Scientifically speaking....

or not, that was a really fun story to read. I smiled throughout it! I pictured two stuffy scientists letting it all hang out! It was great!

~Honey

soldier_heartsoldier_heartabout 19 years ago
As a Scientist i feel

... compelled to verify your findings. I can't wait. Would you like to be my subject? My probe is at attention and ready to try it. Thanks for writing this and sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Bingo! This one is great. :)

Petite.. I loved this story. It appeals to me on several levels.. the fantasy involved, the analytical side.. If there is such a thing while you're into the act....

-swjunckie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very articulate and calculated scientific research

WOW! So very HOT. I have been through many scientific experiments, but none have even cum close to that one. I sure wish I had been there to document the experiment. The next one may need to include a third "disinterested" party. Keep up the great writing! Looking forward to more!

VandrenVandrenabout 19 years ago
Nice Follow Up

Very nice. I like the twist/perspective and how the "scientific" edge starts to crack, falls away, and returns. Nicely done. :)

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