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Anonymousalmost 4 years agoSpare us
Don't do a part two, part one was miserable. Find another hobby or go back to work after this foolish quarantine is over.
forsaken11almost 4 years agoAnnoying
This story may have some potential to be enjoyable, but the use of initials instead of names is very annoying.
norcal62almost 4 years agoWhat some of us readers will do is insert names for the initials.
The prior comment is accurate. Initials are irritating to read. Cut it out. Don't make the male a weakling, either.
norcal62almost 4 years agoDrop the physical descriptions.
Most of those seem to be the author's fantasy self-description.
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