All Comments on 'Exploring the Expo'

by Wrexscar

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lovemesomephillylovemesomephillyabout 2 years ago

Nice first entry. Noticed a few grammar issues and we wish the sex scenes had a little more detail and flow but I liked it.

D_O_LondonerD_O_Londonerabout 2 years ago

Great erotic first story, looking forward to the next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story. Loved it. I usually like more build up/ but this worked, too.

RavenTrueRavenTrueabout 2 years ago

Wow!!!! So much action. My man would love to go to a porn convention. Maybe I'll agree to this year's.

4certain4certainover 1 year ago

Great first story. I'm hoping to see more stories from you soon. *****

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I don't do this for the money just the dopamine when strangers give me 5 stars. I have just uploaded my third tale to this site. A short exhibitionist tale with no sex. I'm always writing but never usually finishing. My current long project is on 95k words and probably h...