All Comments on 'Exposed by His Parent'

was nice story until end when you messed up the boyfriends name

Great catch! You will be happy to know I found an editor for future submissions. Glad it was okay other than that

Wonderfully sexy little stroke story, Angel. The older man/younger woman is a great fantasy. Thank you for sharing your kink!

Definitely the product of a kinky, depraved mind. I LOVE IT! I particularly like the image of Angel on all fours, begging to get assfucked, not really to preserve her relationship with Dane, but just to experience what it's like. Definitely kept me with just one hand on the computer...

I loved it. I love all your other stories as well. Keep writing!

This is the first of your work I have read. Great job -- it pushes all of the hot buttons. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

Thoroughly enjoyed the build-up and final climax...nice suspence, and very naughty...

Loooved it!! As usual, keep writing!

Once again a very creative idea, well written and thought out. One more proof reading would probably have fixed up a few glaring errors. There's a couple of sentences that don't make sense, and some of the dialogue is a bit stiff. A real hot story though. Sufficient character development and sex that's nice and graphic. I liked the surprise turn when it turned out that Daddy wanted her ass. I think we all expected him just to finger her, or maybe fuck her. Keep up the good work.

Hot story, so many fantasies and some "taboos" kept me rock hard all he way through

I don't usually go in for non-consent, but you wrote it in such a convincing manner that it was arousing all the same .. thank you,

Great story, and very well written. You have a delicious, hot and nasty style... keep writing!!! Ace

I really enjoyed this - so much so that I started to tease myself :-)

You have a real talent in setting the scene and portraying the characters in such a short time

Thank you for sharing

Katie

oh my god this story gets me so wet.thanks huggs and kisses

Great story...Had my cock throbbing for attention. Looking forward to the next visit when Dad and son plan an adventure. Maybe a Double Penetration

Very dark and sensual story. I love non-conscent stories and this one tops one of my favorite late-night reads.

This is such a sexy story and I am craving for more. Can I have more please?

So totally f'ed up

Loved the story! Hope you continue it!!

While there is no way I can see something like this happening, it was still a hot read.

Though it seems highly unlikely it was a very hot erotic story I thouroly enjoyed. One thing is the name Dane or Dale?

Fantastic, best n/r story, the ending could have been longer, but still extremely sexually tense story. Are you going to resume writing?

My secret fantasy, two men having their way with me. Father and son is even better. Nice story.