by creepysandman
Well done❕ Very well done indeed! I give this entry 5🌟
I absolutely love the comedy you've woven into the story. I think this was an excellent follow on to your first chapter and I'm looking forward to more soon.
Much better second chapter, expected a longer chapter though. Not really a fan of the control aspect, but we'll see how things develop. Looking forward to more.
The power mommies have is beyond hot….I remember helplessly shooting like that…mommy would just confidently stare….she knew she had me..
I knew you could do it. Looking forward to chapter three. Pay attention to the links between stories. Some who have read one may not find two. Thank you.
The innocent CFNM part was great, but I lost interest when it turned sexual. The story is so well-written I'm giving it 5 anyways.