by creepysandman
The build-up is great
Some reader like to jump direct to action
Mine is a long build up, the more the better
Take the time, your story of great
Maybe a further adventure, the three of them to a naturist resort with the money from eBay?
Lots of build up is fine. Don't want build up? Go fast forward a movie.
are you going to finish the story or just leave all the readers hanging??????
great story, nice to see a more detailed relationship, also british english gives a nice touch to the story.
Liked the story but when's the incest going to start??????????? Gave it a 4.
Not much to it no sex no incest all talking and no action!!! This is Literotica incest site you should have continued and added some incest too this story???????????????? Just a 3
Im am looking forward to the continuation of this well written sexually exciting story of Mother , sister and son. My dick is hard in anticipation ..