by slowMINE
Interesting characters and lots of fun to read & imagine!
I can hardly wait for Chapter Three! You write well and
take care w/ grammar. WELL DONE!
Loved the First one...The second was just as good so hurry up and make us Chapter Three!
Just love the character development and the plot twist.
Very good story, really pulls you in, the good grammar makes it so you can just read through. Love the stories, keep them coming.
Yeah, that covers it!
That and "oh, poor Dave" lol
Now, will Tessa be ok with Nicole meeting Quinn, and all that would likely follow?
Gotta say, had it not been a sister it would have broken the character for me... But since its a twin, it just breaks my brain!
J
Yeahhh I'm not rating this till I get some serious classifications in the next chapter. If it was Tessa with the tongue bar that's just not the fuck at all how that would have gone