by slowMINE
...the same guy that said he probably would've left during that one pivotal scene in ch 1.
Again... I would leave. She just makes the girl I, more or less love, and the girl of said sister, run out of the aptartment crying their eyes out. Then she turns to me and says "I need to un-wind"...?
LOL... My response? "Pop in one of those dvds and do it yourself".
However... As I have said before. Great stories, keep them coming.
Some of it is VerHot... but now you've done lesbian, bondage, anal, toys, twincest, threesomes, pegging, first time and I probably forgot half a dozen... what will you do next, midgets or public humiliation?
At this point, Dave had lost person status and has become a sex toy. He had the makings of a genuine character with recognizable emotions, but that must have been inconvenient.
Nicole? Prop.
Tessa? lure.
Quinn isn't even in charge, lust impulse is.
bummed.
J