All Comments on 'Extra Virgin'

by PlatonicCatapult

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BelindaG70BelindaG70almost 5 years ago

Hot story! Thanks for sharing it. I really enjoyed the way you described everything in such detail.

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nylonpunkienylonpunkiealmost 4 years ago
Took me a while to work out the pun :)

A very well told tale, a pleasurable balance between touching moments and greasy filth. Thanks for sharing, x

LeCavalierLeCavalierover 2 years ago

Nice story! I also like your style of narrating: it is very simple and friendly. A few typos to clear, but then nobody is perfect. I love it how he went everywhere except her pussy. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic! Great storytelling and hot sex!

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Just an older man writing dirty stories that (hopefully) actually have some artistic merit to them. I'd love to get positive feedback about how my stories affected you physically, emotionally and artistically.