All Comments on 'Extreme Punishment Ch. 01: Rebirth'

If she hurt you so bad, get away and stay away from her..

Thank you for saying that. That's what I'm doing in reality, at least until she can fully take responsibility for her actions and be a better person. The story is almost all true until the ending. I didn't pick up my phone. Chapters 2 and 3 are going to pure fantasy.

Like the buildup and the experience of someone that can help this guy get over his betrayal. At least it is a start to finally acknowledge you are part responsible but the other person has the bigger responsibility. We need to find out what happened that caused Vixen to blow up to hate so much. How did Vixen end up in this story? You have a slightly different approach and would love to discover how you plan for punishment since there is a dominant streak in play. So much pain and humiliation could be parsed to keep us all engaged.

There will be 2 more chapters to this story. Chapter 2 will focus on the punishment needed to open the door (consensually of course), then Chapter 3 will bring Vixen (primary partner) into the picture to join with punishment. I'm purposefully leaving what happened vague and only alluded to, because ultimately, it's not what the focus is. Also, it's so you can fill in the gaps with your own theories/head canon.

Great start.....

What happened???

Where’s the rest of it?????