by melodytokis
In English grammar and word order. Report to my office now!!
Very entertaining, keep it up, however how Melody entered to take Ashleigh's place is a mystery to me.
Its been a long time since I have gotten so hot from reading erotica. I wish I could find someone like the dad in this story. Excellent job, its like you're inside my brain writing down m fantasies. Thank you and keep up the good work!!! I want more!
Melody,
Part 2 was even better. Good writing and how you captured the pleasure and pain aspect was good too. I plan on reading more of your stories and enjoying your picture too.......visualizing you on the table.....bound.....hands tied......eyes covered......hair being pulled....
RESPOND SOON.
Joe
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Well, too bad this story line ended just as it was getting hot. Ashleigh is just getting into the bondage side of things. I wonder if she will find out that she is a sub waiting for a master to take control. Guess we will never know just how far down the rabbit hole she would go.