All Comments on 'Eyes Meet'

by ElectricGinger

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Sorry, I don't get it.

At first I thought it was an old man seeing his life before his eyes as he dies, then you slipped in the woman coming through the door again at the end and now I am no longer know what to think

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Its oke

Great at the start need to more lustly and playful.Practice a bit you have it in you

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