by sr71plt
I really enjoyed this one, nice use of the song for inspiration. I got a little confused now and then with who was who but over all it worked out. good luck in the challenge:)
Rich language, visceral in the way of some of your best stories. Reached deep and put me in Christina's skin. Terrific story.
I liked the use of the other Georgia and the Russian setting. The atmosphere was good, too; things felt dark and claustrophobic. Good luck. :)
This story was creative and original. You showed admirable skill and originality. If it hadn't of been an erotic story I would have loved it.
Despite all of the thrusting and giving and breaking, there was just something detached and bland about the sex. Maybe it was just me, but I enjoy stories like this (non-consent, taboo) and this one didn't do anything for me sexually. It was like hearing someone talk about a painting. It sounded gorgeous but I just couldn't see it.
...it felt a little too much like a college European history lecture with a few sex scenes tossed in to keep the class awake. Have to give you props though for utilizing the "other" Georgia well as your plot setting.
I loved the foreign setting and your use of the "Other Georgia." It was well-written and I appreciated the attention to detail. Very visceral and absorbing. I felt more attention was given to atmosphere than the actual sex, I felt sort of removed from it, but overall a really great submission.
I had trouble accepting that the husband would want her broken in by a larger cock though. Wouldn't he want to be the first?
A well written story.
I can agree with the comment that the eroticism got somewhat lost in conveying the event and atmosphere, but as a work of literature it was very good.
A great story. The word possession was overused though! I loved that she was voluptuous with a rounded belly, something I find so sexy but so many people in modern day don't, I think I need to time travel back to 1914. I love the settings and the political history. The image of Rasputin having sex almost made me regurgitate my bliny. An excellent story that I shall look forward to reading again.
I loved the setting and the way it was written - it built up the tension!
Sick of the Americans calling it the "other Georgia." No you ignoramuses yours is the other Georgia!!!!!!!