All Comments on 'Fabienne and June Ch. 02'

by Pixiehoff

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HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 2 years ago

I love the way you've made Fabienne 'different'. Too many women are either pressured or put pressure on themselves to be 'ideal' or 'perfect'. Big or small, large or little, it makes no difference. There is much truth in the saying, "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." I'm loving this story already, and the contrasts between Fabienne and June (body type, age, profession) just add to the sexual frisson I feel when I'm reading each chapter. I'm looking forward to chapter 3. You must be bored with me awarding 5 🌟 to your stories, but they so deserve each and every 🌟

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It's amazing how many feelings and emotions Pixiehoff evoked in this one fairly short chapter. My mind and heart were all over the place as the ladies "got to know each other a little better" in more ways than one. The thought of Fabienne going back "home" and leaving June behind made me sad, but the ending made me laugh. June's line: "just think, we could be cleaning the restaurant now!", and Fabienne's reply: "Which reminds me", before she scooted down the bed to lick up June's nectar, was erotic comedy gold. Well played Pixiehoff. As always, I look forward to whatever comes next for our heroines. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

JPintrainingJPintrainingabout 2 years ago

There is not much I can say……except that I just loved every word, and I am not even biased ..💋

ArkingArkingabout 2 years ago

There is a simple way of painting a word picture, and you have found it. The way you easily describe two lovers mating for the first time, you Pixie Hoff are a word smith extraordinaire. Why can't I give you more than 5 stars?

Another captivating piece from an absolute powerhouse of a writer.

MaonaighMaonaighabout 2 years ago

I'm more than pleased that fortune is smiling on Fabienne at last. Life (or nature) has dealt her a duff hand but instead of whining about her lot she is making the best of it. Vive la difference!

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

OMG - surely one of the most sensually romantic, passionately erotic scenes you’ve created to date. Together, one, intertwined — so beautiful all while both came to know one another with each passing moment. I will reread for the insight and the simple joy of it. Thanks. xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

My darling June, well, what can I say except that you inspired both every word of this, and the emotions it coveys. Love and kisses, your Pixie xx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Anonymous, and I am so glad that you appreciated this. It is rare (in fact I don't think it has ever happened before) that I devote a whole chapter to pleasure, but in June's case ... xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Olwen, darling, just as no woman ever minded being told she was beautiful (even if she knows she isn't, so no author ever minds five stars - so, once more, thank you xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you very much, Bobbi, I am honoured by your comments xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much, darling Maonaigh xxxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, darling Migbird - I am delighted xxx

amadeuseroticamadeuseroticabout 2 years ago

I couldn't comment earlier, was busy with the place, hiring help ...

But now everything is taken care of. Wolfie's practically runs itself. Please continue to make love and write about it. But consider stopping by later, as we will have life music.

Carpe diem

😘 xxxxxx

sissygirlErica17sissygirlErica17about 2 years ago

a very sensual as well as erotic chapter of lovemaking. Well worded and I felt every sensation and emotion * blushn * in ways different then June and Pixie.

I am glad for Fabienne and June to have found each other, as if " two morning doves " calling out for years and then finally meeting in a Loft. Well done !

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 years ago

Pixie! Another winning chapter!

Your characters and plot continue to present us with exceptionally endearing dialogue and intimately arousing erotica!

Fabienne’s reflections are so deeply intense and emotional, that they are almost philosophical.

Importantly, your soliloquy will resonate with all of us (and our lovers) who are, in some way, “not normal”.

And then you insert this interlude of uncertainty (insecurity?) into a sexually precarious moment so that you can use it to springboard into more sensual carnal pleasure!

5 stars for lusty sexy fun, fearless writing, and profound introspection!

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Darling Wolfie, I never consider a chapter complete until I read your comment, which, as ever, is a delight - live music there will be xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Erica. As you know, the morning doves are grateful for your help xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Paul, thank you so much for this wonderfully apposite comment xxxxx

amadeuseroticamadeuseroticabout 2 years ago

And to me, Darling Pixie, the story is not complete until I read your response to my comment.

Enjoy love, dance, music, food for body and soul. ❤

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Aww, thank you so much xxxxxx

SerradaCSerradaCabout 2 years ago

As always, you make me smile. A lovely chapter. I am glad she was careful with the crumbs, oh goodness the feel of crumbs on sheets?!! Worse than sand in your .... never mind.

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 2 years agoAuthor

Giggles, thank you Mama S xxxxx

Soccerfanpen21Soccerfanpen219 months ago

My first reading of your stories but definitely not my last.

PixiehoffPixiehoff9 months agoAuthor

Thank you so so much Pen xxxxxx

GayKatGayKat3 months ago

Another Winner,,, Yes! 💋

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Hallo Pixie!

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Queen Jackie, slipped up and said their getting married, when I ask how do you know, have you read ahead?

Then came the scrambling and all of Jackie's long ass college words, that translates to mean... I think they get married.

Then later she tried, look right here Kat, it says they get married in the story info for chapters 10 and 11... ☹ Oh laidy you are so busted!

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[There was something about that sweaty, sleepy, morning-after.] _ Pixie Love, your singing my song, yummy-yummy. 😊

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[I was, literally, a sucker for early morning pussy. I liked a woman's natural taste, and the idea of tasting her full range of tastes appealed.] _ Oh my Goddess, meee toooo... 😉 and my Beautiful Queen takes real good chair of my kinkier needs!

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[She was right, I was a dirty girl.] _ Queen Jackie's comment in my words. 🤔 As far as dirty girls go, sweet little Fabienne has nothing over my darling Kat, well not so far as the second chapter!

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If you haven't noticed by now, we loved it! ... Thank-You, 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Sweaty Wet Pee Orgasms,,, Yes!

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From your two kinky dike friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

💯🌹🌹🌹💕💕💝💝💓💓🌹💋💋💋

PixiehoffPixiehoff3 months agoAuthor

Oh darlings, I adore your comments - they make me so happy 💕💕💕💕💕💕

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