by Pixiehoff
I love the way you've made Fabienne 'different'. Too many women are either pressured or put pressure on themselves to be 'ideal' or 'perfect'. Big or small, large or little, it makes no difference. There is much truth in the saying, "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." I'm loving this story already, and the contrasts between Fabienne and June (body type, age, profession) just add to the sexual frisson I feel when I'm reading each chapter. I'm looking forward to chapter 3. You must be bored with me awarding 5 🌟 to your stories, but they so deserve each and every 🌟
It's amazing how many feelings and emotions Pixiehoff evoked in this one fairly short chapter. My mind and heart were all over the place as the ladies "got to know each other a little better" in more ways than one. The thought of Fabienne going back "home" and leaving June behind made me sad, but the ending made me laugh. June's line: "just think, we could be cleaning the restaurant now!", and Fabienne's reply: "Which reminds me", before she scooted down the bed to lick up June's nectar, was erotic comedy gold. Well played Pixiehoff. As always, I look forward to whatever comes next for our heroines. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿
There is not much I can say……except that I just loved every word, and I am not even biased ..💋
There is a simple way of painting a word picture, and you have found it. The way you easily describe two lovers mating for the first time, you Pixie Hoff are a word smith extraordinaire. Why can't I give you more than 5 stars?
Another captivating piece from an absolute powerhouse of a writer.
I'm more than pleased that fortune is smiling on Fabienne at last. Life (or nature) has dealt her a duff hand but instead of whining about her lot she is making the best of it. Vive la difference!
OMG - surely one of the most sensually romantic, passionately erotic scenes you’ve created to date. Together, one, intertwined — so beautiful all while both came to know one another with each passing moment. I will reread for the insight and the simple joy of it. Thanks. xxxxx
My darling June, well, what can I say except that you inspired both every word of this, and the emotions it coveys. Love and kisses, your Pixie xx
Thank you, Anonymous, and I am so glad that you appreciated this. It is rare (in fact I don't think it has ever happened before) that I devote a whole chapter to pleasure, but in June's case ... xxxxx
Olwen, darling, just as no woman ever minded being told she was beautiful (even if she knows she isn't, so no author ever minds five stars - so, once more, thank you xxxxx
I couldn't comment earlier, was busy with the place, hiring help ...
But now everything is taken care of. Wolfie's practically runs itself. Please continue to make love and write about it. But consider stopping by later, as we will have life music.
Carpe diem
😘 xxxxxx
a very sensual as well as erotic chapter of lovemaking. Well worded and I felt every sensation and emotion * blushn * in ways different then June and Pixie.
I am glad for Fabienne and June to have found each other, as if " two morning doves " calling out for years and then finally meeting in a Loft. Well done !
Pixie! Another winning chapter!
Your characters and plot continue to present us with exceptionally endearing dialogue and intimately arousing erotica!
Fabienne’s reflections are so deeply intense and emotional, that they are almost philosophical.
Importantly, your soliloquy will resonate with all of us (and our lovers) who are, in some way, “not normal”.
And then you insert this interlude of uncertainty (insecurity?) into a sexually precarious moment so that you can use it to springboard into more sensual carnal pleasure!
5 stars for lusty sexy fun, fearless writing, and profound introspection!
Darling Wolfie, I never consider a chapter complete until I read your comment, which, as ever, is a delight - live music there will be xxxxx
Thank you, Erica. As you know, the morning doves are grateful for your help xxxxx
And to me, Darling Pixie, the story is not complete until I read your response to my comment.
Enjoy love, dance, music, food for body and soul. ❤
As always, you make me smile. A lovely chapter. I am glad she was careful with the crumbs, oh goodness the feel of crumbs on sheets?!! Worse than sand in your .... never mind.
Another Winner,,, Yes! 💋
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Hallo Pixie!
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Queen Jackie, slipped up and said their getting married, when I ask how do you know, have you read ahead?
Then came the scrambling and all of Jackie's long ass college words, that translates to mean... I think they get married.
Then later she tried, look right here Kat, it says they get married in the story info for chapters 10 and 11... ☹ Oh laidy you are so busted!
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[There was something about that sweaty, sleepy, morning-after.] _ Pixie Love, your singing my song, yummy-yummy. 😊
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[I was, literally, a sucker for early morning pussy. I liked a woman's natural taste, and the idea of tasting her full range of tastes appealed.] _ Oh my Goddess, meee toooo... 😉 and my Beautiful Queen takes real good chair of my kinkier needs!
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[She was right, I was a dirty girl.] _ Queen Jackie's comment in my words. 🤔 As far as dirty girls go, sweet little Fabienne has nothing over my darling Kat, well not so far as the second chapter!
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If you haven't noticed by now, we loved it! ... Thank-You, 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Sweaty Wet Pee Orgasms,,, Yes!
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From your two kinky dike friends,
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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼!
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