All Comments on 'Face to Face'

I'm not sure that is the right word, but it was very nice.

LYG,

Definately different from your normal stories. This is a very different style and I like it as much as your other stories. You are very talented.

So I came to check it out and I'm very glad I did.

Very hot and sexy and I loved the way you described your characters and the feelings and emotions they were both experiencing.

janiexx

I like the way things kinda snuck up on him in plain sight. It's much more delicious that way.

Thanks.

Phil

While I liked the story very much, it was this writer's almost rambling, conversational style that I found most appealing. The way the Writer had of describing his characters good and bad points made it an interesting story. Endearing! intimately sexy. Terrific Write!

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Interesting read. Unusual way of meeting the girl next door.

Boyd

My appreciation for a beautiful little tale, beautifully told. A tip of my hat to the author.

than another great story by a very good writer.

Just keep them coming, please! "Loving Wives", "Romance", "Non-Erotic", whatever. Just keep them coming.

Cheers!

is always a nice read.

And. did you notice - extremely rarely disected like loving wives stories are...

about 10 more of you coming at us from unique and varied directions as you do - so well. Also nice was the fact that no one was mugged or disrespected.

Author - you are appreciated and hopefully preparing another in the near future.

With Very High Regard

I think this is about your best so far - very concise and a good erotic romance. Well done!

A truly erotic and romantic journey by two obsessed and damaged personalities. This was one hell of a story!

It's really beautifully written. I like the honesty of the main character and the theme.

I have to agree with DesertPirate. It was very different, but amazingly sweet as well. I have to say I really loved this story. I intend to read more of your stories in the near future. Great Job!

To just let go and follow that course - take that somewhat significant risk and find your way to a new and better lifestyle - neat theme

Even once I'd started it there was a lot of time I want sure I got it, which is odd considering its not that long of a story, but I enjoyed both the ride and the destination...

Very romantic with a satisfying denouement, but I had a problem with both characters. I tried to imagine myself in Shela's place and could not see how or why she would have behaved as she did. Why or how she became so fixated on Jerry when she had trust issues with men. Couldn't do it. It just didn't make any sense.

At the same time Jerry didn't add up either. Years of failures to have a mature relation with any woman should have had an impact on his views. But it was and if he were completely unformed in his identity.

Overall, a clever story but not quite fully satisfying. Thanks for the offering.

You just never know about the boy/girl next door until you take a good look! ;-)

Thanks!

Great romantic story. The best compliment I can think of is: This story made me happy and I feel good after reading it. Thank you

A little bit of sag is sexy and a beautiful face reflects the inner woman.

Nice story 👌 No cheating wife yet....

Well what did he do after he sold the company?.

Till he wasn't. To those commenting with so little faith - ZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZPZP...

It was a flash Romance story after all. Signed: BTW

That was surprisingly really sweet. 5 stars.

One commenter wondered if she had trust issues, why would she fixate on him? I think the answer is simple. She has a decent looking guy next door she thought he wouldn't know, so there is no chance of being hurt. So she watched him. She had trust issues, but she still had desires.

As for him having no experience in relationships, he was a man with a one track laser-focused mind. Most of his adult life, he focused on business; it made him content. Once he met her, he found concentrating on work no longer made him content.

He got rid of what might detract from his desire and went after what he now wanted. Giving her time to catch up.

Very well done and with a plot that is the first for me at this site, thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING BLAZING STARS!

Stupid asshole MC who thinks too much of himself

A quaint love story. But I doubt this was love in the beginning, more of lust at first sight. I know that love begets lust. This seems to be the other way round. Well, so long as they remain happy, it's OK I guess.