by Aaroneous
Excellent start! A little too much foreshadowing of doom and gloom ahead, but I'm looking forward to Chapter 2. And I really shouldn't complain about upcoming conflict, since I complain heartily about its absence in other stories. Write on!
*The dinner and concert? Well, we had to eat. And passing up a chance to see Vince Gill sing in person is like saying, "yeah, I know Jesus is giving a sermon on that hill over there, but I'll pass. I've got better things to do."*
The most Country music fan statement ever! I would be sitting right beside them too!