by thealphamale
A bit out of topic, but are you planning to continue The Chase series? I love that one so much
As always, love love love these two. Bathroom scene is hot. Great chapter, been looking forward to this since the last chapter.
Was definitely hoping to read another chapter soon and you didn't disappoint
Glad you liked The Chase! It was really fun to write and I love those characters so much. For now, that story is “bookended” as it seemed like good place to leave it. Though, I would love to revisit it in the future.
Hi everyone! So glad the feedback on this chapter has been good. The last chapter ended up getting published in the middle of the election chaos and as a result, I got little to no feedback. So happy it was just bad timing and not some adverse reaction to the story 😂. Still a few more chapters left to go!
Jamie and Chris!! Gah!! I'm reading this like, why does this sound familiar???
You know I'm a fan off yours, lol. 😉
Great writing as always!
Love the development in this chapter and cannot wait for the next one!
This is still a great story and I’m still in awe of your character development. I especially love how you’ve tied this story to “Last Months in the City.” A lot of authors try tie ins, but you’ve managed in away that isn’t compartmentalized but also makes sense within the context of this new story. Keep righting and I promise to keep reading! -stac
I read all six chapters in a day, because not only were there these hot sex scenes, there was this adorable and awesome story being told about these two. I couldn’t stop reading. I loved reading both of their perspectives and seeing them grow throughout each chapter. Great plot + Great sex scenes = AMAZING! Thank you so much for sharing this great story with us💙
Come on! You can't write amazing stories like you do that i can't stop coming back to again and again, only to just leave us on the cusp like this! I've been checking your page once or twice a week since chapter six came out. You think just anyone can write shit like this?!? Have mercy!
Wow! You are an AMAZING story teller!!! I'm So Looking Forward to MORE!!! PLEASE tell me there's MORE!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE these guys! And I DEFINITELY see them continuing their relationship throughout their college years getting a place together for the rest of their college years to them getting married!!! And I'm in TOTAL agreement Communication is Vital for Survival! So I'm So Happy Jamie let Levi know not to keep things from each other because as he found out can be DETRIMENTAL!!!!!! I'm hoping you're not done with this AMAZING couple! Plus I wanna see Ryan return the favor of letting Levi find out just how AMAZING it is to receive!!! I'm one of those people that believe that that Most Amazing of all that is Pleasurable should be shared! You're AMAZING and I agree with other comments not just Anybody can write stories This GOOD!!!!!! And continue PLEASE!!!??!!! WOW!! AMAZING!!!!!!
Favorite line: "He was dating a boy with a life and a past- one that he wanted to be a part of." Hot Author, hot
The self-awareness written in the characters... on man..."I''ll always be here for you." He chose instead, knowing that neither a Pi Kappa Party nor a run in with an old flame were not the best occasions for those words."
Then this recognition of family... to the author, your understanding of the importance of family in the Chamorro culture (and many others with extended family blood or years) shows when you included this: He wasn't just dating Ryan Blas- the freshman he met at a party. He was dating a boy with a life and a past- one that he wanted to be a part of.
But more than any of these, your writing these characters as real people... and perhaps they are influenced by folks in your life. Again, thank you for them.