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by BEWD4133

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Def bring Josie in

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
my opinion

Josie should be next

red99m2red99m2over 3 years ago
Editor!

BewD, I really liked the story, but you really need to have someone do an edit before you submit. 1st paragraph, 2 pm, second paragraph early evening.

There are folks on here who who help you out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
next

Josie should be next she had a crush on him

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