by Perky_Goth_Chick
Way to go! Loved how you put naughty and nice all together in a beautiful lovemaking night. I like how you made the hobgoblin respect her in the morning!!!!! Wanting more!!!!
Brilliant - hot, funny, sweet and well-written. Same again, please, and make mine a double! ;-)
Have you considered writing novels? Publishing them. I'd buy, I swear..Great writing, sweetheart!
I just adore this story. I've read it several times. I really hope you write more stories!
i love this... It is a fabulous story. I really hope that you write more. I really love all of your postings!
I think it was amazing i want to be her. It sounded liek she was in pure extessie. Which every girl wants to be.LOL. Keep writing and i will for sure keep reading.
I've read this sooo many times, and each time I keep falling a little bit more in love with it.
Yet again, another incredible story from you! Love it! Would love to read a second part to this!
I really love this story. I've probably read it about six times now. Heck, I think I've already left a comment before, lol. It's just so totally all around good; the writing, the characters, delicious. I've never written a Faery story before, other then in my head on insomnia nights, but suddenly I'm inspired to attempt one. Thanks for a wonderful read! katt
Wow! That was smoking hot. The fae have never turned me on like that before. Damn you are a good writer, I was able to picture the people and settings. Well done!!
FANTASTIC! Perhaps my personal favorite of all I've read on this site so far! LOVE the prose, poetic touches, subject matter, & attention to her emotions. Especially loved the death references.
I'm sending out a wish for you to be truly *fulfilled,* love!
Loved everything about this story. The plot, the characters, the attention to detail and the woman's feelings. The descriptions are very poetic. More please.