by qualitywheat
ain’t even read it, just opened the link to give 1 star for posting in the wrong category!
I am not God. But if you asked Him I believe He would tell you that you have taken His gift and turned it into something foul and evil. Then He would tell you that forgiveness would be given if you only ask for it.
i suggest you post this in one of the following NONEROTIC, POEM or TRASH areas
I cannot even begin to describe the ways this story is wrong. Truly.
As a Christian, albeit an imperfect one, I find this tale offensive. Sorry.
This is really a well written story. Better so, with the lack of sex in it. It is pure love and lust entwined. Congratulations
Your personal thoughts have clouded your mind. Your correct in calling it a sexless story, should be in the poetry section